Oh, darlin' one, that is just the best orges and onions indeed. Made me laugh smooth outloud and the very idea of Jack Onion!! Great! I have always loved in fan fic when a writer can give me the voices of the characters and follow their thinking. One of the reason's I don't use dialogue very much is keeping the voice isn't something I'm good at at all--I can generally follow his thinking, although as I've said, you and Gma2, luvvy, sharklady...all have this marvelously delicate touch of knowing Jack's secrets and sharing them in such a charming way. Hey cut it out, you're making me want to write some more of my little scribblybits and I've got to get my kitchen organize==dynamite would probably help! It's a good story if it makes this much thinking about it.