'Then he carefully looked around and edged towards the wall, so evidently trying to not draw attention that half of the tavern looked at him.'

Hee hee!

'Pointing out gaps in logic to an angry woman wasn’t a wise thing, in Jack’s opinion, especially to an angry woman with a cleaver at hand.'

Who would argue?

'Jack reserved the suggestion that she might move the stall a bit farther from the tavern’s door. Knowing Mandy, the Bride would move sooner.'

I like this lady! And I loved Jack's use of reverse psychology to get the note from her.

Hans was a horse-whisperer? This plot is getting more intriguing with every chapter. Please do continue!